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A Price Unknown

Tiffany was never afraid. Of all the boys in her neighborhood, only she was brave enough to remove the gardener snake that had slithered into the sand pit they played in. Alex was always afraid. Afraid to cross the road, afraid to step on cracks, afraid to sleep in the dark. The neighborhood kids would have called him “weird” or “off” if it weren’t for Tiffany’s right hook. After a long summer of playing together, the LaChaumiere Cul De Sac kids were back to school, ready to celebrate the first true holiday of the school year, Halloween. A whole 1 mile away from school, the duo felt like at 10 years old they were competent enough to ride their bikes to and from - so long as they were accompanied by one another. 

“C’mon slowpoke!” Tiffany said, her dark chestnut hair pulled back from her petite, round face. She had one foot on her bike pedal and the other on the ground, bracing herself to push off the moment her partner in crime got on his bike. Her blue eyes flashed a challenge at Alex, who simply shrugged and swung his leg over his “Hotrod”- a name lovingly bestowed upon the hand-me-down red bike he got from his older brother. 

“You’re always rushing me but, ya know, we’re never late.” He said quietly, his brown eyes cast towards her back pack. His blonde hair glinted in the early morning sun, giving off the orangish red hue of the sunrise happening directly beside them. With that, both children shoved off, and Tiffany’s mom, Julia,  watched from the porch as the blue and red biked duo streaked by. 

They met each other at the drinking fountain by the door once the last bell rang, shoving books into backpacks while walking down some cement stairs. Alex stopped short above the second step, hopping lightly onto the third. A crack. Back on the bikes, a teacher said she saw the two ride off towards home, just like every other day.

Cruiser lights bounced off of Tiffany’s house, blue and red reflecting off of the light yellow side paneling. 

“This just isn’t like them,” Julia cried, a hand covering her quivering mouth, “They’ve been gone for four hours, detective.” Detective Randall nodded and took a look around the Cul De Sac. 

“Don’t worry, ma’am, we’ll have the dogs out here in less than 15 minutes and we already have a search party combing the woods as we speak.”

“We need to find them before dark, Alex- he, he can’t handle the dark!” Rhonda, Alex’s mother, moaned from her spot on the porch, her head leaning against the wall and tears streaming down her cheeks. Detective Randall went to meet the canine unit, armed with a hairbrush of Tiffany’s and a shirt of Alex’s. The dogs took off in the direction of the school, leaving the detective thinking that maybe they had picked up on their scent from that morning until, halfway there, they went into the woods. A handful of volunteers accompanied them, calling out the children’s names periodically. About a mile into the woods, in a place about a mile from the school and a mile from the Cul De Sac, two dogs began barking vigorously. “Over here!” a volunteer called, pointing to an abandoned blue children’s bike. 15 yards from that, a red one. 

“How do you gain access to this part of the woods from the road?” Detective Randall asked Sheriff Kristom. 

“Not easily, but there are some two tracking paths that wind between the local farms out this way.” 

“I need a list of all private residences within a three mile radius.” 

“You got it.” 

Day turned to night, and Detective Randall had searched 6 of the 10 houses on the list supplied to him by the Sheriff’s office. The 7th was an early 1930’s ranch style farmhouse with a barn behind it. He knocked on the door, greeted only by silence. 

Maybe they’re working in the barn? He thought to himself, making his way behind the house. 

A light swung above a rusty, double paneled wooden barn door. Left, then right, left, then right- a low groan sounding with each swing. Through a crack between the door and the worn, faded red wood wall came a line of light, dimly illuminating the gravel that led up to the door. The rain started to fall in spatters, making the swinging light give off an aluminum twang. One hand out-reached towards the door, he called out “anybody there?” Scuffling accompanied by a soft, muffled groan was the only response he got. Shoving the door open, the Detective stepped into the barn. 

Yellow bulbs hung from the ceiling, illuminating the light grey concrete interior. Cobwebs ran across the ceiling corners and dust filled the ones on the floor. The dust was disturbed in a trail leading up to the door and splitting to the left to a workbench and to the right into fading darkness. Detective Randall unholstered his police-issued flashlight from his utility belt, clicking it on and pointing it towards the dark. Another small scuffle sounded from further down the hall. The detective kept his back to the cold radiating, wet wall and swung his flashlight into the first room. 

On the floor, lining the walls were dog crates, and the detective could just barely make out the outline of a man sitting on the top of one off to the far left. He stepped farther inside, trying to get his flashlight at an angle that would illuminate the figure before him. 

“I wouldn’t do that, or little Tiff is going to have to find a new best friend to protect” said a rough, dry voice in an almost amused tone. 

“Sir, I need you to put down the child.” Detective Randall said in a stern, steady voice. 

“You would all say what I’m doing is wrong, but you don’t know the truth like I do” the crazed man giggled. 

“Just let the boy go and you can tell me all about it.”

“NO! I have the kid NOW, and you’re going to listen to what I have to say!”

“Alright, alright, just calm down. You’re right, you have the control here. I’ll listen to what you need to say.” 

“I must make them pay for their blissful ignorance. Heaven would rather ignore our deviousness, and allow us to act out on these most invading thoughts. Why, then, would they give me the power to do so much wrong if they are good? And if God is not good, then none of us are. I will make heaven pay for making me like this, and the price of their negligence is the blood of the children who they failed to protect from me.” 

“You can’t control the way you’re born. How about you put the kid down and we’ll go tell them, together, how we need to make them pay.” The detective had the flashlight aimed at him, his gun unlatched but not yet drawn. “We can tell everyone how the heavens made you feel this way.”

“The price has been paid in full- but what good is a cost unknown?” He sighed, “Well, its known now.” The detective heard a click, and then the room was a reverberating explosion of sound followed by ear ringing silence. 

As his hearing faded back into existence he started to hear whimpers, and small cries. He turned around, looking for a light switch to flip. As the light buzzed on, the detective saw a frightened Tiffany locked in a tarp covered kennel, and a blank faced Alex standing next to it, staring at his hands. The blood.

The blood was everywhere, and it was easy to see where it came from. Brain matter splattered the wall behind the kennels, and the dropped body of what looked like to be a white 30-40 something male slumped off to the side, his skull reduced to fragments. Detective Randall lifted both kids up, and got them out of the barn. He deposited them into his on-the-clock SUV and radioed for back up, letting them know that the kids had been found and there was an apparent suicude committed by the perpetrator.  The detective started the vehicle up and made his way towards the Cul De Sac. 

He pulled up to the light yellow house, and to roughly 20 community members waiting for the kids to be returned. The parents ran up to the car doors, scooping their children up. 

“We’ll need you to bring the kids in within the next two days for questioning, but upon initial inquisitions they seem to not have been harmed.” Randall informed the parents, turning to face Tiffany, who was almost as tall as he was while in her father’s arms. 

“Oh, Mr. Police Man, he said to give this to you.” Tiffany reached inside her coat and brought out a thin hardwood box, maybe used at one point to store cigars. Detective Randall lightly grabbed it from her.

“Thank you, I need you to go rest up now. We have a lot of questions we need answered, okay?” 

And with that he turned towards his SUV, reaching into his pocket to pull out the satellite phone his department had given him to reach the rest of his team. “Hey, guys, I think we need to get to the lab ASAP. He left us a present.” 

In the lab, Detective Randall set the box on a cleared table, where four techs wearing full PPE began running sonars and scanners over it.

“Non-explosive” said one.

“Non-radioactive” said another. 

“The go ahead to open is confirmed, Sir” said the senior lab tech. 

Detective Leroy Randall extended his hand to the box, hooking his finger under a lip in the middle of the side. With a flick of his hand he gently opened the box, letting the lid lightly thud onto the table top. “What are these?” He said, gloved hand picking up the ziplock bag inserted into the box. 

20 minutes later and a M.E. from the morgue came up to Randall, a haunted look on his angular face and shadows behind his doe brown eyes. “Detective, sir.”

“Alright, Hopps, what is it?”

“How many kids did you say you rescued?”

“Two.”

“And they both had all of their fingers?”

“What in the hell are you..”

“Sir, these are the intermediate phalanges of at least 16 separate juveniles. Each has been soaked in ammonium hydroxide and polished.” 

“He kept them as trophies. Dear God, we need to go back.” 

Peter Needs Help Part One

Peter p.o.v 

Why do you care? I thought again, rolling my eyes at the teacher looming over me, staring at his red corduroy vest. My eyes dropped from his yellow dress-shirt to his black slacks until they rested on his black dress shoes. 

“If you don’t put in any effort I’m going to have to fail you!”

“What do I care?!” I shouted, rising from my desk and turning away- my voice cracking as I turned to hide the tears that were tickling my eye-rim.

 You’ll never be good enough for them anyway, what’s the point in trying. The voice whispered, low and raspy in my head. 

“That’s it you! Go to the office!” Mr. Krosen boomed, his long arm pointed towards the door. I looked into his icy blue eyes, narrowed in anger at me. 

“Or what?” I smirked back at him, turning to look him in the eyes with my voice suddenly only loud enough for him to hear. My body was buzzing with adrenaline. His eyes widened as he gulped, his pale freckled cheeks flushing crimson. With that, I turned away and walked out of the door. The white floor tiles passed under my feet. 

 

Jesus Christ what I would give to gut that man-

3, 6, 9, 12; 

NO! I don’t want to hurt anybody…

3, 6, 9, 12.

You wanna hurt that man-

My head twitched to the left as I tried to shake the dark voice’s velvety tone away, as if by shaking my head I could clear the dark thoughts that clouded my brain. 

24 tiles from the class door to the hall where you turn left. 

3, 6, 9, 12.

The office. I opened the door and slumped into one of the plastic navy blue chairs that lined the wall, sure that the teacher had already called the assistant principal and told him of what I’d done. I rolled my eyes and turned my head, catching the slightest whiff of vanilla and strawberries. I aimed my gaze towards the scent, zeroing in on her. She was beautiful. 

I sat there, in that chair, my eyes cast towards the blue carpet that spanned the office floor. I kept tilting my head, letting a lock of dark shaggy hair move away from in front of my left eye long enough to catch a glimpse of her. Her face was heart shaped and she had the lips to match. Perfect symmetry. 

I have to have her. 

I gulped as the dark thoughts slipped back and forth from the back and forefront of my thoughts. Her fingers made a lovely scraping sound against the edges of the papers as she turned them. 

3, 6, 9, 12. 

12 turns of the pages in her thick orange binder later I risked looking at her again. Her hair glowed like an amber halo, the lights from the ceiling bending around the part down the center of her scalp. She looked up, almond shaped green eyes flicking from the student she was helping to the binder in her hands. Her hands. Lovely purple polished nails off of dainty thin fingers. 

Don’t those look nice...

3, 6, 9, 12; 

3, 6, 9, 12; 

3, 6, 9- 

“Mr. Dunlan, 

Tick 

the principal will see you now.”  

Tick. 

I rolled my eyes.

12. 

24 clock ticks after I looked into the most beautiful eyes I had ever seen, I stood and turned towards the office, preparing myself for the reprimanding that I knew was coming. 

When I came out of the office, the girl was gone. Her red backpack was slung across the back of her chair, the top of her bright neon orange binder peeking out from the open pocket. Casting my glance from side to side, I made sure I was spectator free. 

Don’t let her get away. 

 1, 2, 3. 

Three breaths later and I grabbed the binder, quickly ducking out of the office and into the hall. 

Peter Needs Help Part Two

Mae p.o.v 

The light grey speckled cement scraped against the bottoms of my converse, my steps making a light thud and then a soft drag. I pivoted my toe into a divot in the pavement, balancing myself on my toe and then hopping back down to both feet. It was a beautiful day. Although school started the week before, autumn still was a couple weeks off. The air was heavy with a sunfire glow, the moistness of the lake in the air descending as dew onto the blades of grass off to the side of the road. I hate walking alone, I thought as I reached for my keys hanging from a neon blue lanyard I had gotten from my mother the year before. I unlocked the round bronze master lock and turned the handle, stepping into the entryway. The grey and white stone-like linoleum flooring was smeared with mud, a trail leading away from the door to the shoe rack along the left wall. “Rodney!?” I said with irritation in my voice as I slid my shoes off and placed them on the rack. “You can wipe your feet before you come in, ya know!” I yelled up the stairs in hopes it would reach through his headphones. 

“What are you yelling about now?” Rodney groaned, angst flavoring the exasperation apparent in his voice. 

“Go grab the mop from the utility closet by the washer and clean up your mess.”

“You’re so bossy.”

“Well I’M the big sister, so go grab the mop and clean up your mess.” 

He left with a sigh and roll of his blue eyes, casting his lashes into his shaggy blonde hair. Little brothers are so annoying, I thought, turning to climb the stairs. 

As I dropped my bag down onto my light green duvet, I slid off my jacket and slung it across the chair and desk I kept kitty-corner from my bed. A large bay window sat along the back wall, opposite from my bed, with a row of books along the wide window ledge. The chair sat adjacent to the window, angled as to allow a reader to ponder their book while observing the backyard. I walked across the room, closed the white and pink with green rim curtains that hung in front of the window, and turned to my desk. It was a mess. I hadn’t had time to actually clear it off in a week or so, since I had been so busy with my final project. I carefully straightened the papers into order and placed them in a folder labelled in thick black sharpie as “homework”. I grabbed my backpack and unzipped the largest pocket, reaching for my binder. I leaned forward with a bolt of anxious confusion as my fingers felt nothing but the smooth inner lining of the bag. My heart raced. Just calm down, I thought to myself, you probably just left it in class. I thought back to earlier that morning in my Writing in Education course. Did I leave it on the desk? I wasn’t sure. 

Peter Needs Help Part Three

Peter p.o.v 

The light slanted down the lengths of her hair, casting a shadow on her face of her perfect nose. 

I can get her for us. 

The curtain shut. I sighed. 

1, 2, 3

Three breaths later and I turned away from her window, continuing down the street to the pizza place my older brother worked. 

“Sup Pete??” I heard after the jangle of the bells on the front door alerted my brother to my arrival. 

1, 2, 3 

Three steps later and I smiled at him, 

“Nothing much, what’s up Syd?” 

“Busy night, I’ll be here for a while. Just make sure you stay in the back and..”

“Yeah, yeah, I know, I’m not a kindergartener.” I said, irritated at his coddling me. 

He doesn’t think you can do anything right. 

I threw my bag into the booth and sat next to it, the binder still in my hands. 1, 2, 3, three breaths later and I opened the binder, reading the first page. 

Mae Kosnic

3rd Year 

Final Project 

Writing in Education 

General Purpose: 

To teach kids how to properly administer beginning level first aid. 

I turned the page. 

The Scraped Knee. 

I read. She likes to fix people, I thought. 

She would make a wonderful mother. Not like that BITCH!

Yeah..Not like my mother. If you could call her that. My mother liked drugs more than she loved her kids, and loaned us to the highest bidder. Our tears meant nothing to her, only her next fix. My heart rate spiked and I looked at the veins bulging in my arms, clasping my hands together to keep them from shaking. 

You will not cry

1, 2, 3 

Three breaths later and I placed my hands flat on the table. 

1, 2, 3

Three breaths more and I was calm. 

Mothers are supposed to protect. 

Would she protect her kids? 

I had to know. I needed to know. 

Would she protect them? Would she, would she, would she? 

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